Yasmin's+Page


 * 2009 ||

December 1 0, Dear Mr. Figueroa,

You know that feeling you get when you get to school? That maybe tired or excited feeling. Well if you’re tired I know what could cheer you up. Your locker could cheer you up. Your locker cheers you up because it is you, you decorate your locker to make you happy. The only way you can decorate your locker is if you have a big locker. I have two friends that would both be tired when they got to school. One had a nice big locker, the other had a not so nice small locker. My friend with the big locker would be happy when they opened their locker. When my friend with the small locker opened their locker they stayed tired and sad. My friend with the lager locker had a fun and organized locker and would go to class on time with a smile on her face. My friend with the smaller locker would go to class, late, tired, and sad. __What Happened__ My friend with the bigger locker got better grades then the friend with the smaller locker. My friend got better grades because she would be on time to class and would be happy. My friend with the smaller locker got worse grades because she was late to class, tired, and sad because her locker was too small. She could not organize her locker well or decorate it to make her happy. It took her a while to find all her books because her locker was too small to organize so she was late to class. She was sad because her locker was not decorated because it was too small. My friend with the bigger locker was on time to class because a big locker is easy to organize. She was happy because she could decorate her locker which made her happy.

__Bigger Lockers Affect Your Life__

You see, if every student had a big locker they will have so many opportunities like


 * being president
 * being a brain surgeon
 * being a lawyer

To have these opportunitiues you need good grades. Having a big locker is a huge step to getting those good grades. Big lockers really affect your life. I know that students will do at least a little if not alot better in school.Please consider making every small locker bigger. Sincerely,Yasmin

If we had a big locker teachers would be happy.With a small locker you have to wait to be able to get to your locker.If studens take to long you don't get to your locker until after them which makes you late to class.Teachers will get mad because they will not be able to start their class right away.Not being able to get to class on time makes your grades bad and teachers mad becasue they have to wait so they can start their class.Alos some teachers might start class with out students and the students that get to class late get in trouble.They might also miss somethig important or will not know what to do.Big lockers are important to everybody.

​ ​my questions:
 * 1) Are there any spelling mistakes?
 * 2) Is there anything I can add?
 * 3) Is there anything I could fix?
 * 4) Does my letter make sence?

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