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Dear Mr.figuroa , You know that feeling you used get when you were a student and you stepped into your favorite teacher’s classroom? That smile on your face and excitement-you can feel the love ---and know that you are ready to start the class? Well that’s the feeling I want. I want to be excited about my teachers too like my friend. My friend and I are alike in a lot of ways. We both get A’s and B’s in class. Both are active in sports, and we both are looking forward to have a great school year. However there is a difference, While my friend is getting straight A’s now, is her teachers pet, gets easy test and doesn’t get a lot of homework ; I get A’s and B’s, my teacher doesn’t really care, she doesn’t keep a teachers pet, and she gives us tons of homework everyday. So now I get A’s and B’s while my friend gets straight A’s.

WHY IS THERE A DIFFERENCE ? Everyday when I come to school my friend is always excited for it, but not me I am always tired and I hate school. I am not able to pay attention in class because I want to have a different teacher so that I can enjoy school. I am not trying to say that my teacher is bad and she is extremely mean she is not, I just want to have a teacher of my choice so that I can understand her and what she is saying and then I wont hesitate to ask her any questions I wont even be scared of her. I guess the teachers do make a lot of difference in life. AFFECTING PEOPLE.

Just imagine how many people will be effected when you choose teachers the students, teachers, school and more.The teachers will be effected because they would have students who would like to pay attention and learn so the teachers wouldnt really have a hard time teaching the students.The school will be effected because alot of students will start getting A's so the school might even be popular for getting the highest grade scores from the students.Atlast the stusents ,they will really be effected because they will love there teachers and they will start learning more.Also they will do better in there studies and i bet there parents will be proud of them.These are more benefits that can happen i you let the students choose there own teachers.

WHY IS THAT? The reason I say that is because now my friend has achieved a lot of success but I haven’t really and that’s because I am scared and I don’t understand my teacher. It’s also because I don’t come to school because of my teacher and then I miss a lot of lessons so then I get more confused and a lot of my friends too want a teacher of there own choice. Would you like the students to not pay attention in class and them to not come to school? If you dont then you have to let us choose our own teachers. In fact some of the teachers want there favorite students too or the students. THE REASONS These are all the benefits you will get after you let us choose our own teachers. *The teachers will understand them and try to encourage them and the students will feel comfortabl e   

* The students won’t hesitate to ask questions to the teacher s.

If you agree with all these reasons and if you want t he students to be happy and be good students, then you will have to say yes for choosing your own teachers. We all will be very excited and happy if you make us choose our own teachers. Thank you very much for taking your time to read this letter.

DIFFICULTIES.

Mr.figuroa i k now that choosing teachers will be a difficult deccision for you but all the stuudents will promise you that they wont misbehave or do anything bad. We all we try our best to do our best in our studies and we will try to accomplish A's in our test. I bet that the teachers will like this and choosing teachers will be a great benefit for our school. SINCERELY, NOOPUR SWADAS

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