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Dear Mr. Figueroa Haven’t you noticed how much lunch costs at HHMS! Well if you don’t know, it costs $2.75. For us that seems a lot. What I’m trying to tell you is to lower the price to at least $1.00. That will help many kids and families be able to save. I know you have reduced and free lunch. But what about those people who are forced to pay $2.75. Why doesn’t everybody just pay a dollar? The reason I say this is I am one of those people who are forced to pay $2.75. It takes a lot of money away from my college education. Occasionally I’ll go to Mrs. Hewitt room at the end of the day. I’ll buy some snacks which are about a dollar a day during a 180 day school year. One thing I know is if we lower this money a lot more kids will be heading of to college a lot faster than you think. In fact if you have a child, your child will probably love to go to college when he grows up!

I know what you are going to say Mr.Figueroa. 1.Oh we can't afford to lose that much money!! 2.Everyone will think we are a cheap school

WAYS THIS CAN HELP STUDENTS

You know there are a couple of ways this can help the kids in HHMS · Kids can carry less money and they won’t lose any money · Parents will able to save more money for their kids’ education in colleges ·   Students will learn responsibility, if a kid is given $2.00 and he loses it he’s not responsible.

I can guarantee you Mr.Figueroa …….once you lower the money you will see many happy faces in the hallways and also on parent teacher conference night. I can also guarantee you that once you reach your 60’s you will hear on the news many kids from HHMS in Edison, NJ are going to college. All because of you lowering the prices, parents could save their money and now send their kids to Harvard, Duke, Yale, Rutgers, Princeton, and Marquette. Even a lot more places will be open. This would probably be a disaster with all those kids applying for college, but on the bright side you can see that many kids want to go to college.

BY:Kailash Kumaranayakam{CELTICS FAN}LET'S GO CELTICS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Affected people paragraph:parents

The parents will get affected by if the school lowers the money parents will be able to save and a lot of kids and parents will have money for their life. As i said before many kids will be heading of to college because of this. Many famalies are begging for this type of situation where they have a chance to save a lot of money in the long run.Many parents are in need of paying off their mortgage and by lowering the money many parents will be able to save the money and pay of their mortgage.