Raj+Corp

​ = = Raj Patel Manhattan, NY 45268 protege000@yahoo.com
 * 5 Pivot Lane **
 * 1-800-PRO-TEGE **


 * Objective: ** To be accepted by Poole Industries as the next apprentice.

· Worked for TD Bank from 1980-1983. · Worked for over 20 banks worldwide from 1984- 1990. · Calculated cost and predicted whether the product would make money or not for Apple and Microsoft from 1992- present day.
 * Work Experience: **

· Worked in local orphanage to help raise children. · Baked food for organization to help homeless. · Cleaned local park to help earth go green. · Went to Haiti in 2010 to build houses for homeless.
 * Community Service: **

· Read, write, and speak English and French fluently. · Have had over 30 years of accounting experience.
 * Skills and Abilities: **

· Earned bachelor’s from Yale and master’s from Harvard. · Graduated Valedictorian of Harvard in 1976.
 * Education: **

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 * References available upon request. **

Business Letter:

5 Pivot Lane Edison, New Jersey 08817 March 16, 2010

Apex Corp. 12 Worldwide Ave. New York, NY​ 08325

Dear Apex Corp: I, Raj Patel, from Protégé Corp. gladly welcome you into the Apprentice! We are the Protégé Corp. consisting of me, Sayyed, Victor, and Uzair. We wish you the best luck.

Our corporation consists of much strength. I am a highly trained accountant, Victor Nazario works with computer science. Relating to computers, Sayyed Hussain works with Video/Media and Uzair Shaikh is in the medical department. We are all highly educated, because we are all either from Ivy League or Division 1 colleges. As you can see, we are worthy opponents to you in the Apprentice Unit. Your company will be hard to defeat because the members of your group have a high education. Although we hope to win the Apprentice, if you we don't you probably will. Once again, I would like wish you the best of luck. May the best company win!

Respectfully Yours, Raj Patel

 POOLE-COLA

 Everybody knows how hot it can get in the summer. Almost all children play outside and return home sweating. If you were a kid playing outside, wouldn’t you want a nice refreshing drink? I would definitely want a refreshing drink. And Poole-Cola even heightens your senses when you’re playing sports! The problem is choosing the right drink. But fear not, the perfect drink has been invented. This drink is Poole Cola. It tastes so good you can almost smell it from a mile away. Its refreshing taste will crawl down your throat and satisfy your taste buds as it quenches your throat at the same time. Doesn’t that sound good? So be cool use Poole!

Magazine Ad: POOLE //COLA // //IT HEIGHTENS YOUR SENSES! //



LETTER TO EDITOR

Kings Road Brooklyn, New York 08824 3/26/10

Editor of Poole Illustrated

Dear Mr. Editor,

We request you to put our ad in your magazine. Just think about the benefits. We may get money for our ad, but the people will be reading your newspaper. Imagine how much the sales would go up! To make you even more money, we can put a coupon in your magazine. That would literally double your sales. Besides, we know a lot of celebrities. We can probably get them to advertise for your paper.

Now let’s look more at the product. There are many benefits to this product. For one, it has less sugar and it still tastes better than most of the other leading sodas. Poole Cola is similar to Coke, but it leaves a strong, energetic after taste. Wouldn’t you want this brilliant soda in your magazine?

Respectfully Yours,

Raj Patel Raj Patel ​

Three Paragraph Persuasive Proposal

Dear Mr.Poole,

My idea for the magazine ad is pretty simple. Basically we have a short but explicit paragraph about the wonders of Poole Cola. Underneath there is nice, cool, drink of Poole Cola. We also wanted to use this comic website creator that we found online, but we didn’t now how to put it on the wiki. The purpose of this is to make the reader’s mouth water by reading the description and to get him/her to buy Poole Cola.

Our ad uses emotional appeal. It uses this in our kickball ad, because the kicker keeps on missing the ball, but when he drinks Poole Cola, he kicks the ball hard and makes a home run. We choose this type of appeal, because it is usually this type of appeal that wins the viewer over. For an example, the description, of which the emotional appeal consists of, is very strong. The description itself can make the viewer beg to try some Poole Cola.

Our target audience is mostly athletes. We chose athletes as our audience, because after athletes are done, they are usually sweaty and need a refreshing drink. We can exhibit that this drink is definitely Poole Cola. We will not use any other techniques so that our point is clear and the viewer does not get confused. This would be beneficial to your magazine because it is read by many athletes, most athletes will want Poole Cola. I hope you will take this proposal into consideration. From, Raj Patel Raj Patel