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 Dear Barack Obama

The past couple decades before a cruel creation is having millions and millions purchasing this product and causing pollution to our air. Recently just 50 people purchased a cigarette box. $450 dollars was spent that was probably the last thirty minutes it just happens please keep reading if you agree. That this is something that can change lives for many. After school I saw these two young boys walking home from school and they had something in their hands and something in their mouths as well and above the little white and brown cylinder was smoke with a red burnt at the tip before I didn’t know what the heck that was until DARE came. DARE supported kids with a healthy life style and my dare officer Ted told me that it was a cigarette in their mouth and that thing was so bad it, it could have killed them!! Next day those 2 boys who were actually my friends Robert and Rollin they were cousins and what happen was they didn’t look well. I asked them how were they doing and the responses they said was want to Smoke? Lucky enough I said no. This product or a cigarette pollutes the air and this bad can be bad for kids to breath in, also this product had kids trying to smoke didn’t know one man could make this one product and become half a millionaire just from this little box of $7.79 a box could to convince the world to buy it one two three time a week you can buy a video game or an ipod then buy a box of ciggrates. It’s a type of addiction that makes people crazy. This can litter our streets and since they’re already littered were going to have as twice as much with those burnt tip cylinders. One time you smoke your going to not survive the next couple of years this make you mean my dad smokes and he’s sometimes mean. This can also prevent bad breath and rotten teeth. Friends have been tortured with his from their moms and dads and once there’s no more in that box they’re going to be mean, yell at you for no apparent reason at you and when you see a smoker at your work you’d be surprised to see someone smoking but when you see one at your work you’d hate to be mean and tell him to move but he wants to but smokers can be a little lazy even if there going to be crazy and most other people and they suck in the smoke’s air and when you do that for the next 5 weeks you’d can die!!!! So Barack Obama could you please, please band smoking it makes people cruel and pollutes the air causes heart cancer and can make you addicted it is because of DARE that children are safe from violence and they encourage their parents to stop smoking with all that litter on that floor you’d only say “you don’t exist” that little cylinder with a red burnt could betray a world with kids adults and give the heart cancer! So if you realize that our future is not protected by the cause of this action, well… DO something please for the future of our Earth. do you think my first paragraugh should be longer? Help if i need a little more, and i should write more imagery...any suggestions?? Did I spell anything wrong?? or if you want to comment if you know who smokes. At the bottom you will see more questions.

Affected people paragrugh..

​The cruel things this does and does to people this can effect lots of people such as non-smokers this type of group has to watch smokers use ciggrates at work and then what happens is the cylinders are at the ground still with a burned red tip. Since the smokers pollute the air nonsmokers will have to breath it in, they will eventually get heart cancer and they will gat addicted and more drug stores will be having ciggreates purchased everyday more than a box of ciggrated you can buy food for kids. Kids should not smoke they breath in the smoke and thats bad another reason we had DARE a program that keeps kids awy from smoking and drugs. Nonsmokers could die same amount of people die os smoking and half of that die of breathing it in lots of parents die cause of this and a releative has lost a son he/she once loved this can affect our world..