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Dear Daddy, I know that you are a very smart, and wise man. You always help me with everything. You never want me to get lost, right? Or for me to be stuck somewhere because you love me! So maybe getting me a cell phone would help. If I have one I’m always safe. The first reason I say this is because you could always stay in contact with me. For example if I’m at the park and you want to check on m, instead of driving by the park to check on me you could just call me instead. Or for instance if I’m walking somewhere **__ALONE__**, I could just call you to say that I have reached where I was walking to. One thing I know is that if need to call of my friends for school reasons I could use my phone to call them instead of bothering you when your busy. The second reason I want a phone is that I could call you for emergencies. Like if I am my friends house and you or mommy are going shopping and I need something I could just call you and tell you what I want. So you could come home with what I want instead of me starting a tantrum. Another example is say I’m at the park and you said to come home at a certain time I could look at my phone and see what time it o I could come home on time. Be a role model. You can show me how to use it correctly so I don’t take the wrong road! A third reason for me to have a phone is that I could always use **__MY CELL PHONE__** if the house line is busy instead of waiting for the house line I or using you r ell phone I could just use mine. You have a your own phone so you get all your calls on that. But my friends have our house number so they always call me on that. But I had a cell phone my friends could just call me on my PHONE instead of the house phone. When of my friends didn’t have a cell phone and she was at the park she had to come home in I hour but she came 2 house late. I know that I could be that late if I don’t have a cell phone But if I have a cell phone I could be one time or even earlier. I would only have certain people: § You § Mommy § House number § Uncles § Aunts § Cousins § Friends- lots of girls and only a limit of boys. See I won’t even argue with you because I have all the people I need. Yes I need friends for school purpose, and I will only have limit of boys! So you know that me having a cell phone would benefit me and **__YOU__**. So there’s no problem for me having a cell phone!

Sincerely great daughter Questions: How is the paragraph I highlighted because I'm not so sure about that paragraph? What are some ideas that might help me?

Effected People Paragraph: One group of people that might be in it for me to get a cell phone are my you and mom because you to can always stay in touch with me.Also you and mom can call me whenever (except in school) and i can call you whenever I need to! Also say if I have to go pick my brother instead of coming home calling you I could just go straight there and call you on my way. See how many ways is helpful for me having a cell phone!