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 * The Story**

Do you know that feeling you have it so hard, your life impossible, you’re being picked on? In fact I had a friend who felt the same way. In fact he felt exactly like that. He felt that that his teacher was picking on him all the time. One thing I know is that this is one of the worst feelings you can have. But the truth is that he was always fooling around and the teacher was being a bit hard on him. For this reason he would always get B’s and C’s. So he and his teacher decided to switch places with each other. Imagine what this would look like total chaos right. For the whole day both of them struggled to survive. The teacher fooled around and yelled and ended up getting bad grades and a detention. My friend had a horrible time maintaining order in the class and grading. For a fact I can tell they were ready to scream. The day after that my friend was well behaved, he was attentive in class and got all A’s and B’s. The teacher seemed nicer and had respect for the class. I think that before all of this neither of them cared how the other felt.
 * What Made the diffrence**

You might wonder what made the difference. You might think why he changed so much in just one day. It might seem like I’m lying. He told me that after he switched he knew that being a teacher is hard work. Once I felt that same way but unfortunately I couldn’t switch places like him. That whole year I was struggling to get good grades and I didn’t know why it was happening. So I’m asking you if you allow a switch place day in school it can benefit both students and faculty.


 * The Affected People**

This will affect the teachers, giudance, and the pricipal by havig less complaints so they'll have more free time to do what they want. The teachers will not have to waste time in detantion with students and go on with thier lives. Giudance people can just sit down and relax and still get paid. The principal by him not felling the greef of suspending a students.

This can help the students by having a understanding between one another. Get better grades which means that you get a scholarship so you have more money for yourself and no more of your parents yelling and nagging you. You'll have it easier with making friends and with your teachers as well.

This could even help parents too by not having to complain to your child. Knowing your money isn't wasted add felling a sense of acomplishment.


 * The Argument**

I hear the critics know saying this is a risky move to do. This could throw the school into complete chaos. What’s the big deal if we don’t do this people will just learn it through the hard way. This means that we miss a whole day of real school and education. People would act improper.

Think about the positives. These problems could be resolved by an extra day of school which means more money for you. You wouldn’t have the stress of giving harsh punishments. Think the time you save with this. This school could be nominated for a reward. All you have to do is give up one real day of school. In fact my friend’s school is number one in the state.


 * A better life**

You can obviously see that this could help the school. In fact if you apply this to your school amazing things will happen like:

v Students having respect for other students and their teachers.

v Students and teachers having a positive attitude.

v Having fewer complaints about unfairness.

v And much, much more…

These secrets can help any school become a better community. By using those skills students have a 9 out of 10 chance of getting a better grade average. Wouldn’t you like to now secrets that can make you famous like:

v Having students with excellent attitudes

v People under standing one another

v Getting cooperation between people

v Not having many complaints.

If you said “yes” to any of these then you should apply this right know. I guarantee that the school will be running better right after this. I promise you will not regret saying “yes”. But the choice is yours, so what do you say. Sincerely, Tyler Mercado

Questions: 1. Do i need to describe my story more 2.Should i add headings 3.Should i add another paragraph 4. Do you under stand my paragraph

Affecting people paragraph