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Raj 12/10/09 English Period 1

Dear Dad,

__ The Reasons…. __ Remember the ultra long car trip to Niagara Falls? It took us at least 8-9 hours to get there. You were probably bored to death, being bombarded with questions made by my brother and I that just aggravate you such as “I’m bored”. I bet you’ve always wanted to see the end of that. Well, now you’ve finally found the light out of that tunnel. Shimmering in the holy light pouring down from heaven is the Ipod touch. It is the way out of all of your troubles in many areas. It will decrease fighting, increase studying methods, and help you relax and much, much more.

__ What About The Fighting? __ The fighting will decrease, because both, my brother and I have something to do. I will be listening to music, while he is playing Wii, or vice versa. So therefore, the fighting will be decreased. Also on car rides, we will both have something to do, I will have my Ipod touch while he has his game boy.

__ The Dangers __ I would like you to consider getting me an Ipod touch because of its texting factor. For an example, what if I am kidnapped? If I have an Ipod touch I can text you so that you can call the police and free me. But if I don’t have an Ipod touch, I will have no way of contacting you. So if I have an Ipod touch I will be safe at practically all times.

__ The Black and White TV show __ I simply hate, hate long car rides. I mean what are you supposed to do. There is literally nothing to do but look outside or go to sleep. Whereas you are bored just as much, with my brother and I whining like little babies asking “Are we there yet?” or, “I’m bored. It’s like we’re all in a black and white tv show with no escape. As soon as the I pod touch touches my fingertips, the tv show will soon turn into color.

__ From your Point of view __ I bet that you are probably thinking you’re never going to get me an I pod touch. But before you say no, try to imagine life without all of that. Your life will be entirely peaceful and there will be no arguments. So the almighty decision is only in your hands, for you to consider, for you to accept and decline, but the power is only in your hands. I won’t turn into those I pod freaks who listen 24/7 that really don’t do anything but boom their I pods to max volume and basically destroy their hearing. I promise to keep everything in control if you get it to me.

__ The good Points __ So here are all of the benefits: · Decrease fighting · No boredom · Increase of grades · Peace to your life · No fretting about kids · Better behavior

__AFFECTED PEOPLE__

So before you make your final decision please consider what will happen if you __do NOT__ get me an I pod touch. You will live in a very irritated world, coming home everyday to face the same problems wanting to run away and just relax. Trying to run away from all of this mayem, chaoss, and crazy havoc. Not wanting anything to do with all of these hardships. But now I will take you through a journey of the opposite world, where I do have an Ipod touch. Now you realax 24/7. You come home from work excited to see your smart, caring loving children not arguing, getting good grades and doing most of the work for you. Now I'm thinking you like the second world best, correct? Now imagine if that was your everyday life? Wouldn't you love it? Would you have any other reason to complain? So the decision rests in your hands. Pick out which road to take.

From, Raj

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