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Dear Mr.Figeroa,											Do you know that feeling of joy and excitement? When you know that you have new + bright students coming into your school and it will be a terrific year. What would you do without it? 2 years ago on a field trip, me and my class got to choose our own chaperones. For example, me and my friends went to school early in the morning and chose the nicest and funniest teacher in the entire school. Then when me and the rest of our class went on the field trip we all had the time of our lives! Our day was filled with happiness and joy. It was the best day ever and when it was time to leave we were all sad because we wanted to stay with our friends longer, but we could do nothing because the principal was the boss. The next year on a different field trip and somehow even with the same group members, the trip was probably the worst in the history of field trips. I was bewildered when we had the worst field trip ever. And on top of that there was a terrible blizzard and we loved it! I say this because when the buses came to pick us up ... WE ALL RAN TO THEM LIKE MANIACS!!!! We were thankful to leave and go home. WHY DID THE KIDS HATE IT SO	One thing I cannot figure out is “why did we hate it?”. When I went back and looked at the information the only difference was the chaperones. Here are some good things that come out of this. - The children will lern with an open mind			       - Parents might volunteer during school events even more			- BOE ( Board of Education ) might give you a bonus in your salary								 			                     	I just want to say is that many good things can come out of having children picking their own teachers. Please consider this. QUESTIONS 1. Do you think there are any missing words that I have not found? 2. Can you find any grammer mistakes? 3. How can I make it longer? 4. Can you give me ideas to add to my letter? --AFFECTED PEOPLE PARAGRAPHS-- This can also help the teachers by them getting a larger salary. If a teacher is getting $40,000 that same teacher might get $60,000 or more by working for 11 months instead of 10. With that money the teacher can go on a large cruise or vacation to make up the time spent teaching us angelic kids. This can also help the residents of the Board of Education by the government giving them more money in their monthly or yearly salary. I know that I mentioned the salary going higher a lot but the world doesnt spin without money.