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Dear Mr. Figueroa,

You know that feeling when you just settled in with a teacher that you really like. Well that’s what I felt with Mr. Lothian. The reason I say this is because I like Mr. Lothian better than Mrs. Schneiderman. Once when I settled in with Mr. Lothian, marking period 1 was over and we had to switch. I have nothing against Mrs. Schneiderman, but I just like Mr. Lothian better. For example Mr. Lothian is funnier, I got better grades in Mr. Lothian’s class. Here are some reasons why I like Mr. Lothian’s class better than Mrs. Scneiderman’s class.

· Mr. Lothian doesn’t give home work every night. · He doesn’t go crazy when we click are pens more then once. · He doesn’t go crazy when we are chewing gum. He tells us nicely to throw it out. Mrs. Schneiderman gives us a warning. · Mrs. Schneiderman doesn't put homework up on the Stinger website.  Switching teachers is like starting school all over again. We have to learn different class rules, different classwork and homework rules, and adjusting to a different teaching style.

If I ask everybody in my class, they would want Mr. Lothian back. We call him Mr. Lo Lo. If you were a kid you would want Mr. Lothian back too. Mr. Lothian was the best teacher I ever had in school. If you could make it so we have Mr. Lothian all year I would love it.  __AFFECTED PEOPLE PARAGRPH__ People that would be affected by switching science teachers would be students,teachers,and faculty. The students could be affected by switching science teachers because if they did good in the 1st class then, they knew what that teacher expected. Then once they switched they might do bad because they dont know what that teacher expects and how they grade. They could maybe do good in both classes. But i did good in Mr. Lothians and ok in Mrs. Schneidermans class. Sincerely, Mike Fogarty :-}

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