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Dear Mr.Figeroua, Can you picture a room full of children sitting in a classroom with their eyes all drooped down, slumped in their chairs tired of classes and studying. By not having recess after or before lunch, smelling the fresh breeze the students lose many good advantages. When me and my friends heard there was no recess in middle school it made me disappointed. I felt like there was no good in middle school and only education. Many other of my class- mates were upset when they heard this too. This issue would be un comfortable for fifth graders to hear and upset about in the coming year. How does this effect this issue affect the students lives and education? One of the reasons is that our school should continue recess is that the students will get a fresh mind and will be ready to start the other classes with a bright mind. Without recess, the students educational growth will diminish and make a big bad impact on their future generations. The students will get tired easily and will get mediocore grades. We should try to prevent this from happening to the future generations. Another reason we should keep recess still in our school routine is that the teachers, staff or you could finish or do something important while we are outside. For instance, like correcting test papers or going to an important meeting. So then the teachers wouldn’t be wasting our studying time or their time. In fact, many teachers cant finish something important so they leave us talking or working on something else. This issue will effect us on our grades and our focus in class. So we have to work more effeciently in our time. This will help the students and the teachers or anyone further in education and will have time to spend their time more productively. The last reason why recess should continue is because it helps the students get good grades. Running, jumping, and playing sports gives the students good skills. Even though there is P.E. we maybe need to have few minutes to enjoy the nature and the world around us. By going outside we will get great advantages like learning to communicate better with others, making new friends, working as a team and more. I can hear the critics now. Recess is no use. What's the point? The students will not improve on their education. They will just hang out with each other and not do anything good in the right time. What's the big deal? It is a big deal. Everyday students are not focusing on their studies. They do not get the proper education they need.We, the school has to become a better community to learn, enjoy and more. This will only happen unless we work together as a team.

Sincerely, Neethu Pottackal

Questions 1.What should I add to the sentence "It is a big deal." to make it longer? 2.What should I add to my counter top argument? 3.What should I improve on in my letter? 4.What should I write in my second paragraph?

AFFECTED PEOPLE PARAGRAPH

The people that is going to be affected are the principle, teachers, students, parents and other people in the school.This might affect them because they wouldn't know if it would improve the students grades. The teachers would get affected be affected because they would have time to do things.